夏天的味道

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这篇《夏天的味道》，小作者通过分章节的叙述了“毕业前”、“毕业时”和“毕业后”不同的繁忙景象，给我们介绍了毕业班学生面临的场景，虽然忙碌但很充实。

In this "Summer Taste", the little author described the different busy scenes of "before graduation", "time" and "after graduation".Enrich.

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我们曾在风雨中共进，也曾在彩虹里微笑；我们一起闯过困难，尝着夏天的味道……

We have entered the Communist Party of China and smiled in the rainbow; we have made difficulties together and tasted the taste of summer ...

——题记

--Inscription

一、毕业前味道：淡雅中包藏着甜蜜

1. Taste before graduation: The elegant mid -bag is hidden sweetly

夏风吹拂着校园，一切都略显幽静，然而在我们的教室里，确实一片忙碌。

The summer wind blows the campus, everything is slightly quiet , but in our classroom, there is indeed a busy .

女生们在教室里走来走去，捧着一本同学录，为以后的回忆奠下基础，仿佛这一切都是上天早已安排好的，让我们彼此记住对方。男生则帮女生填着同学录，偶尔也在背后说些小话。看不出我们的一丝紧张，反而有些淡雅，笼罩在一片浓浓的友谊之中。当然，也不会忘了敬爱的老师，在教室里打闹一番后，恭敬地递上同学录，让老师提笔。显得那么甜蜜。

Girls walk around in the classroom, holding a classmate record, laying the foundation for future memories, as if all of this has been arranged by heaven, let us let us, let us let us, let us let us, let us let us, let us let us.Remember each other.The boys helped the girls fill the classmates, and occasionally speaking some words behind them.I ca n’t see our tension, but it is a bit elegant, shrouded in a strong friendship .Of course, you will not forget the loved teacher. After making a noise in the classroom, he respects his classmates and let the teacher mention it.It looks so sweet.

夏天，毕业前，6.1节到来，当我们沉浸在欢乐的儿童时代时，想不到毕业考试会马上来临。不过没关系，总之只要过好这小学的最后一个6.1就一切都好——始终忘不了，夏天里的最后一次欢乐，伴着清凉的夏风，竟越飞越远，淡雅中包藏着甜蜜，也只能期盼初中的第一个，也是最后一个6.1了。

In summer, before graduation, verse 6.1 arrived. When we were immersed in the happy childhood, we couldn't think of the graduation exam.But it doesn't matter, in short, as long as the last 6.1 of this elementary school is good, everything is good -never forget, the last joy in summer, accompanied by the cool summer wind, farther and farther, the elegance is sweet and sweet, and it is also sweet, and it is also sweet, and it is also sweet, and it is also sweet, and it is also sweet.I can only look forward to the first one in junior high school, and the last 6.1.

二、毕业时味道：忧郁里夹着几分紧张

Second, the taste of graduation: a little tension in melancholy

夏雨来得那么迟，在下午6：00以后，如期而至，我们正好放学，沉沉的书包压在肩上，那上面背着六年以来所有的努力。回到家中，一个劲地做老师布置的作业。第二天早上又早早到起床，来到学校，开始了一天的魔鬼训练。

Xia Yu came so late. After 6:00 pm, arrived as scheduled , we just happened to be out of school, the heavy school bag was pressed on the shoulders, and there was all the six years in the past six years.effort.Back at home, a work -like work was worked hard.I got up early the next morning, came to school, and started a day of devil training.

做着太多的练习，听着老师太多的嘱咐，背着太多的压力。教室里，仍是忙碌一片。夏雨嘀嘀嗒嗒地下着，松树上亮晶晶的一片，校园里水茫茫的一片，然而我们的无心观赏，呆在教室里，埋头苦练，苦练。偶尔停下笔，也只是忧郁一下，又开始工作。

Do too much practice, listening to the teacher's too many instructions, carrying too much pressure.The classroom is still busy.Xia Yu 嘀 is under the ground, a piece of bright crystal on the pine tree, water on campus is vast., but our Unintentional watching , staying in the classroom, buried our heads hard, and practiced hard.Occasionally stop the pen, just melancholy and start working again.

生活，夏天。一切都井然有序，终于——毕业考试的一刻，集中精力，答好试卷，紧张一下，忧郁几分，交卷，把心放下。

Life, summer.Everything is orderly order , finally -the moment of graduation exam, concentrate, answer the test papers, be nervous, melancholy a little bit, hand in, put down the heart.

几分紧张不再有，忧郁倒是常常，等待我们的，就会是毕业后的分离。

A little tension is no longer, melancholy is often, waiting for us, it will be the separation after graduation.

三、毕业后味道：轻松内包含着伤感

Third, after graduation: easy to contain sadness

毕业了，轻松了，夏日的阳光灿烂了。可是，结束了，离别了，灿烂中更多的是伤感。

Graduated, relaxed, summer sunny .However, it was over, parting, and more sadness in the splendid.

也许我们都未哭，但能猜想到，背地里，我们都哭了。我们拥有漫长的假期，也拥有漫长的分离。希望记住彼此的笑容，等到有一天，长大了，明白了，大家再在一起品味。

Maybe we didn't cry, but we could guess that we all cried in the back.We have a long holiday and a long separation.I hope to remember the smiles of each other. When one day, when I grow up, I understand, everyone will taste together.

就这样，伴着毕业，夏天过去了。偶尔也在这个夏天里，回想着那个夏天，那个夏天的味道……

In this way, with graduation, summer has passed.Occasionally in this summer, thinking about the taste of that summer ...