美丽的星空

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处处留心皆文章。本来是平淡无奇的星空，小作者却能写得津津有味，体会到隐藏丰富、最普通、最奇特的美，小作者细心观察，合理想像，运用拟人和比喻的手法，把星空的美景有活力地展现出来。

Pay attention to articles everywhere.It was originally a bland starry sky, but the little author can write and taste it, and realize the hidden, most ordinary, and most peculiar beauty. The little author observes carefully, rationally imagine the use of anthropomorphic and metaphorical methods to make the beauty of the starry sky vibrant.Show.

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这是一个宁静的夏夜，万物都沉睡了，只有天空中的星星在眨巴着眼睛，神秘地望着我们。夜，静极了！月亮妈妈带着自己的孩子们在夜空中散步。多么美丽的夏夜星空！

This is a quiet summer night. Everything is sleeping. Only the stars in the sky are blinking and mysteriously looking at us.Night, it's extremely quiet!Moon mother took her children in the night sky.What a beautiful summer night starry sky!

看那北边的极点，有一颗闪亮的星，像一颗璀璨的明珠，耀眼极了。那不就是北极星吗？北极星下面有7颗闪亮的星，组成了一个勺子。它们大概就是著名的北极星吧！那不是害人精——天蝎吗！你看它又慢慢摆动着它那又长又粗的尾巴，移动着8条腿，张望着对方。可不，天蝎又要毒害那些可怜的小星星了。如果，我是超人，一定飞上天空，把可恶的天蝎劈成两半，让它永远不能在去欺负小星星。那只老鹰飞得真快，一转眼就不见了。喔，它原来是夜空里出了名的巡逻警卫——人类的好朋友天鹰座。它可是一只好老鹰，每天都在天空中巡逻，路见不平，拔刀相助。

Looking at the pole on the north, there is a shiny star, like a bright pearl, dazzling.Isn't that the Arctic Star?There are 7 shiny stars under the Arctic Star, forming a spoon.They are probably the famous Arctic Star!Isn't that harm -Scorpio!You see it slowly swinging its long and thick tail, moving 8 legs, and looking at each other.But no, Scorpio will poison the poor little stars again.If I am a superman, I must fly into the sky and split the abominable Scorpio into half, so that it can never bully the little stars.The eagle flew so fast, and it disappeared in a blink of an eye.Oh, it turned out to be a well -known patrol guard in the night sky -a good friend of human beings.It was a good eagle and patrolled in the sky every day.

夜，仍然是那么静，天空中的星星依然是那么神秘的望着我们，只是多了一个沉睡的人儿。多么美丽的夏夜星空啊！

At night, it was still so quiet. The stars in the sky still looked at us so mysteriously, just a sleeping person.What a beautiful summer night starry sky!

天渐渐晚了，月亮也慢慢升起来了。弯弯的月亮发出一丝银色的亮光.可中间却有一些黑色的地方，我想那黑色的地方不是月宫工“工人”在砍伐桂花树，就是嫦娥又在默默地遥望人间，希望能感受到人间的温暖。过了一会儿，月亮像怕羞的小姑娘似的钻进了层层叠叠的云朵里。

The sky is getting late, and the moon slowly rises.The curved moon emits a touch of silver light. There are some black places in the middle. I think the black place is either the "worker" of the moon palace workers from cutting the osmanthus tree, or Chang'e is looking at the world silently, hoping to feel the world,Warm.After a while, the moon drilled into the layered clouds like a little girl who was afraid of shame.

不知什么时候，那一颗颗珍珠般大的星星出现了。星星们互相眨着明亮的大眼睛，似乎是在用眼睛表达言语。有几颗星星钻进了云层中，大概和月亮玩起了捉迷藏吧！远处，几颗大而亮的星星像是灯笼一样挂在天空中，给人照明，又好像几位解放军叔叔默默地巡逻着。那些小星星，凭着自己的力量，把是星光融合在一起，撒向大地，撒向人们。它们虽然那么小，却那么友爱团结，无私奉献。看到这儿，我也竖起大拇指称赞它们。有的也许不好意思了，转眼间就不见了。说实话，我还真想学它们若隐若现的“法术”呢！

I don't know when the pearl -like star appeared.The stars blinked each other's bright eyes, and they seemed to be expressing their words with their eyes.A few stars drilled into the clouds, and it was probably played with the moon!In the distance, a few large and bright stars hung in the sky like lanterns, giving people lighting, as if the uncle of the PLA patrolled silently.Those little stars, relying on their own strength, combine the stars together, spread to the earth, and spread to people.Although they are so small, they are so friendly and united and selfless.Seeing this, I also thumbs up to praise them.Some may be embarrassed, and I disappeared in a blink of an eye.To be honest, I really want to learn their looming "spells"!

我发现，星星的颜色是不同的，有淡蓝色的，银白色的，浅黄色的等等，真是美丽极了。放眼望去，这些星星就像一块绸段上镶嵌着的钻石。

I found that the color of the stars is different, there are light blue, silver -white, light yellow, etc. It is really beautiful.Looking at it, these stars are like diamonds inlaid on a silk section.

时间不早了，我依依不舍地对这美丽的星空说了声：“晚安！”和月亮、星星一起进入甜美的梦乡。

It's not early, I reluctantly said to the beautiful starry sky: "Good night!" Entering the sweet dreamland with the moon and the stars.