漫漫樱花

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这篇作文中作者描写了美丽的樱花。文章第一段直接点出叙述对象——樱花，开门见山，引出下文。文章语言优美，如把“花蕊”比喻成“一朵朵太阳花”，形象生动，富有文采。

The author describes beautiful cherry blossoms in this composition.In the first paragraph of the article, the narrative object -cherry blossoms, opened the door to see the mountain, leading to the following.The language of the article is beautiful, such as the "flower stamen" as "a blooming sun flower".

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樱花雪月，落樱缤纷……转眼间，樱花已布满了校园，那一树树的火树银花，在风的漫步之下，绽放出一个个天真可爱的笑脸。

Sakura snowy moon, colorful ... In a blink of an eye, the cherry blossoms have been covered with campus. The fire tree and silver flower of the tree blooms with innocent and lovely faces under the wind.

四五月份是樱花盛开的季节。走进校园，首先映入眼帘的便是那一排排的樱花。一团团，一簇簇，淡粉，深粉，乳白……令人目不暇思。走近一瞧，那樱花正在不停地嬉戏、吵闹：

April and May is the season when cherry blossoms bloom.When I walked into the campus, the first row of cherry blossoms were the first rows of cherry blossoms.A cluster, clusters, light powder, deep powder, milky white ... are dizzying.Take a look, the cherry blossoms are constantly playing and noisy:

“我在开花！”它们在笑。

"I'm blooming!" They were laughing.

“我在开花！”它们在嚷嚷。

"I'm blooming!" They were shouting.

然而，它们可知道，是自己把春天的一束束阳光播撒在了人们心田？

However, do they know that they sprinkled the spring of spring in the hearts of people?

樱花花瓣美丽纯洁，层层花瓣就像一个个夹心小面包。在花瓣中间，花蕊像一朵朵太阳花，迎风招展，婀娜多姿。花瓣边缘是一群小点围在一起，显得丰富愉快。我无法用文字准确形容那花瓣的色彩，说它像翡翠吧，它又那么玉琢冰雕；说它像宝玉吧，它又显得那么柔嫩而富有弹性。薄如纸的花瓣，好像轻轻一捏，就能释放出充足的水分。花瓣的花蕊约有一寸长，好像一朵灿烂的太阳花迎风招展，似乎在显示它的婀娜多姿。

The cherry petals are beautiful and pure, and layers of petals are like small sandwichs.In the middle of the petals, the flower stamens like a blossoming sun flower, greeted by the wind, and graceful.The edge of the petals is surrounded by small dots, which looks rich and pleasant.I can't use the text to accurately describe the color of the petals. It is like emerald, and it is so jade -made in ice sculpture; say it like Baoyu, it looks so soft and elastic.Thin as if the petals of paper seem to be squeezed lightly to release sufficient water.The stamens of the petals are about one inch long, as if a splendid sun flower is greeted by the wind, and it seems to show its gracefulness.

樱花开花的反差很小，但在同一棵树上，也能看到花开的各种形态。有的含苞欲放，花骨朵在树枝上显得与众不同，又似乎对与外界有种说不出的恐惧感；有的刚刚绽放，粉嫩的像婴儿的笑脸，甜美纯洁，经不起任何风吹雨打，但依旧惹人喜爱；而正热热闹闹开放着的樱花呢，像一群活泼可爱的孩子，组成了一个丰富饱满的快乐天堂，数世同堂、生生不息。又好似一位亭亭玉立的少女挺立枝头，摇摇摆摆，却显得生机勃勃，又是那样婀娜多姿。

The contrast of cherry blossoms is very small, but on the same tree, various forms of flowers can also be seen.Some of them are desired, the flowers and bones seem to be different on the branches, and they seem to have a sense of fear that they can't say with the outside world; some are just blooming, pink -like smiling faces like babies, sweet and pureBlowing the rain, but it is still loved; and the cherry blossoms that are openly and open, like a group of lively and lovely children, formed a rich and full happy paradise, several generations and endless life.It seemed like a young girl standing on the branches and shaking, but she looked vibrant and so graceful.

衬托着樱花的绿叶在一旁随风飘荡，静静地观赏着这一优美的风景画。绿叶上面的条纹层层叠叠，让人觉得眼花缭乱，好似一根根细长的龙须面在上面荡漾。

The green leaves of the cherry blossoms float along the wind, watching this beautiful landscape painting quietly.The stripes above the green leaves are layered, which makes people feel dazzling, like a slender dragon beard face rippling on it.

樱花，如雪，却比雪还要美，樱花，似云，却比云还要纯洁，望着这布满校园的樱花，已深深地陷入了其境，无法自拔，任凭风吹过我的面颊……

Sakura, like snow, is more beautiful than snow, cherry blossoms, like clouds, but more pure than clouds. Looking at the cherry blossoms full of campus, they have deeply fell into their realm, unable to extricate themselves.The cheeks ...