给老师的一封信

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这是一篇书信体作文，作者给自己的老师写了这封信。文章语言通顺，情感真挚，读者能从中感受到作者对老师的感恩和母校的不舍。文章格式正确，值得借鉴。

This is a composition of a letter, and the author wrote this letter to his teacher.The language of the article is smooth and the emotions are sincere. Readers can feel the author's gratitude to the teacher and their alma mater.The format of the article is correct and it is worth learning from.

作文正文

敬爱的老师：

beloved teacher:

您好！

Hello!

小学六年级的学习生活，给我们留下了酸甜苦来的回忆，有泪水，有笑容，有烦恼......但是最让我印象深刻的是张老师。转眼间，三年过去了，三年的时间，我学会了很多，让我懂得了对老师尊重，对同学有爱，对父母感恩......

The sixth grade study life of elementary school left us with sweet and sour memories, with tears, smiles, and troubles ... but what impressed me most was Teacher Zhang.In a blink of an eye, three years have passed. In three years, I have learned a lot, letting me know how to respect teachers, love classmates, and grateful to my parents ...

这三年来，我们有许多不懂事，不理解的地方，您都那样包涵。像一位母亲对我们慈祥；在课堂上，您像一位父亲，对我们要求严格；在课间，您和我们像朋友，是那样亲密。

Over the past three years, we have a lot of people who are ignorant and incomprehensible, and you all have that.Like a mother kind to us; in the classroom, you are like a father, and you have strict requirements for us; during the class, you and us are like friends.

是您，在我们懵懂无知的时候，为我们悉心教导，是你，在我们为犯错而不知所措时，为我们引领航标。是不是以后，您想家人或朋友谈起我们的时候会露出笑容？是不是以后，您把我们当时的调皮当成一种美好的回忆？是不是以后，您的回忆中也有属于我们的一部分？

It is you. When we are ignorant, we teach us carefully. It is you. When we are at a loss for our mistakes, we will lead the marked markers for us.In the future, you think your family or friends will smile when you talk about us?Is it in the future, do you treat our naughty as a good memory at that time?Is there a part of our memories in the future?

当跨出校门时，我们回眸望一望母校，我们每天学习生活的地方。什么是母校？就是我们一天吗八遍，也不许别人骂一遍的地方。这一望勾起了我许多回忆，想起您，想起您为我们上的每一堂课，想起你的淳淳教诲。

When we cross the school gate, we look back at the mother school, and we study the place where we live every day.What is an alma mater?Is it a place for us to scold every day, and we are not allowed to scold.This hopes evoke many of my memories, remembering you, thinking of every lesson for us, thinking of your Chunchun teachings.

回首往事，憧憬未来，向您道一声"珍重"!

Looking back at the past, looking forward to the future, and saying "treasure" to you!

您的学生xx

Your student XX

2012年5月10日

May 10, 2012